Useless copy - Are you guilty?
Friday, June 13th, 2008
When you make a claim as a marketer trying to sell something, people tend to doubt you. When you contradict yourself or make meaningless statements, they immediately discount just about everything else you say no matter how true it may really be. This makes your job significantly more difficult, so why not avoid it to begin with.
We’ve all seen “New and Improved” emblazoned on a variety of products from breakfast cereal to personal care products to auto accessories and more, but what does it really mean? Nothing. In fact, the message it conveys is that you didn’t even take the time to think about why someone should use your product. Why? Because “new” means it has never existed before. How is it possible to improve on something that never existed before?
Another classic example is “Under New Management,” usually displayed on a gigantic sign outside retail establishments and restaurants. What’s the problem here? The people who are no longer patrons because they were dissatisfied with the previous management don’t pay any attention to that establishment anymore and those that were happy with the previous management most likely don’t want to see someone new running the establishment. At best, they will be indifferent, at worst, they will move on to another establishment. The statement does nothing to inspire new customers to visit.
Think not just about what you’re trying to tell your customers, but exactly why you’re trying to tell them that and what it would actually mean to them.
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